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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Here we are in the middle of the end. We can't move forward, because we still pretend. Are you me, or, am I you, or, are we one in the same, wanting the same, yet, too afraid to admit it? When will this ~nothingness~ ever end? ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A sad dance stalled to a skipping record. Here's to a better beat. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks for the response Richard, and this isn't a current event. A relationship, dead, yet still too comfortable, to face the reality of moving on, into the unknown, but both having moved in opposite directions, where previous love cannot be recaptured. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is so very sad and I can understand this frustration and hope you can go on and feel like everything! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think you knew I would read this and my mouth would drop onto the keyboard because this is so like me...and him...us... yeah, you knew. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sad... a sad stalemate of motion... nicely done |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dearest Dixie, My impression of your writing leads me to believe that you are still in love and wanting that relationship to work. This has to do with an old relationship with a man who recently came back into my life, but this was the then and it is the now, in my case. A place never to be gone back to. I hope this did not cause you any pain or you think I was singling you out. From what I have read of you, it doesn't remind me of you. Hurry with your next poem, for maybe I've misread. I wish you ever the best that life can offer....your poetry speaks. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Pat, sometimes it takes a long time to get the motion back. Very nice writing on a sad subject. Hugs, Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
being stuck in neutral with the freedom blues again......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not a very comfortable (or maybe it's too comfortable!) situation to be in. When you're stuck in neutral, you go nowhere fast! ~ hugs Linda |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiyaRegards2u, am catching up on my reading and came across this poem that truly is special... A touching write... Hugs2uPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is sad! I hope things get better. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
in the silence i believe, in the silence i believe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Looks like Coco has been rooting around in the back poetry....Glad she did... Thanx for this one Pat... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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