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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-12-17 03:51 AM

We drown in Moon's rain,
   the flow of such pain.
That's when emptiness aches,
   heartfelt mistakes.
Days endless of gain
   to nights crescent lakes.

Rise above we shall,
   peak over this well.
Reaching skies we can share,
   cloudless and bare.
Let Love's story tell
   of such depth and air.

For our moments contain
   moon's ebbing spell.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-12-17 04:21 AM

yes we do, yes we shall, yes it does...just beautiful...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-12-17 10:01 AM

Such beautiful verse...explores the depth of heart so well. ThisDiamond
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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-12-17 10:28 AM

''We drown in Moon's rain,
where emptiness aches in,
endless days.......

Reaching skies we can share,
cloudless and bare.
of such depth--
moments contain
moon's ebbing spell''

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-12-17 10:31 AM

I like the way you write. Your words are in perfect rhyme..........my favorite style of poetry.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-12-17 10:53 AM

Ebbing spells.....yes, that's exactly what our moments contain. Excellent write, Craig.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-12-17 12:03 PM

(sigh) Oh Craig, this is so lovely, sweet friend, and may you always be singing in the rain and moon dancing with your special someone! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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