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kayjay
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0 posted 2002-12-16 10:08 PM


You're luscious in your sibilance
sublime in awesome resonance
I'm tremulous in my hesitance
intoxicated dissonance

Would I, should I, could I dare to
Would she, should she, could she care to
See in me something to bare to
Find for us something to wear to
Play beneath tonight's full moon

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

© Copyright 2002 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-16 10:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Ken, I just love this, sweet friend, you always paint the moon and stars so gorgeously in your words, this is a true treasure! (sigh) I am not sure who E is but I know whoever this is you're speaking of will love this so much too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-17-2002 01:19 AM).]

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2 posted 2002-12-16 10:32 PM


Ahh Ken!!  This is beautiful!!
It is for me...is it not??
I am honoured...and speechless...(for once!)
Thank you so much!
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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3 posted 2002-12-17 12:41 PM


Playing beneath the full moon? Sure sounds like a fun night!
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4 posted 2002-12-17 01:16 AM


whoa! I liked! Sounds like quite a night!
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5 posted 2002-12-17 10:26 AM



Ah Ken, it could be for none
other than Lady E...

well done, Sir!

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6 posted 2002-12-17 10:29 AM


kayjay
Good write, enjoyed the read.

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7 posted 2002-12-17 10:38 AM


Ken, this is very good. My Love and I like to "play underneath the full moon", too......      

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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8 posted 2002-12-17 09:25 PM


Yes, this is poetry in motion. Thank you.

etoodog

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9 posted 2002-12-17 09:32 PM


Well if this didn't make Nancy's day--and night!--nothing will!

Thanks for putting a smile on her face! I'll bet she has quite a few male admirers! You may have to stand in line!

Earth Angel

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