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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-12-16 08:48 PM


I am back. I lost the knack to write poetry for awhile.
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Deep down
I feel the cold
Everything feels dark
And Empty

All I can feel
Is the coldness
And lonliness
Setting in

But I know
One day
I will be happy
But until that time arrives
I will fight the coldness

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Wind
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1 posted 2002-12-16 08:51 PM


Julie! I thought you would never come back! Ii missed you. I loved your poem. It was sad, and moving.

Never be normal!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-16 08:58 PM


Glad to see that both you, and your knack, are back! Keep fighting the coldness!

~ Sending you warm thoughts, warm hugs, and warm wishes...there, I hope that took the edge off the cold! tehe

EA

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3 posted 2002-12-16 10:35 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, I'm so happy you've come back with a vengeance, sweet friend, I can see the weather has deeply moved you today, yay! (smiles) keep up these lovely writes, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2002-12-16 11:45 PM


Just put on your fuzzy slippers, and sip some hot chocolate, girl. You'll be okay.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-12-16 11:45 PM


Was missing you here Julie. Welcome back.
Never lost, only sleeping.
ThisDiamond

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
6 posted 2002-12-17 12:05 PM


You found it again.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-12-17 01:17 AM


It's gotta happen one day, huh?

You and me both Julie

secretlife
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8 posted 2002-12-17 03:41 AM


This is very nice.. I like it ?


The Lonely Stranger
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9 posted 2002-12-22 07:44 AM


We never lose the ability to write, we occassionaly lose inspiration.

... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2002-12-23 04:43 AM


I keep telling the same thing to myself!
enchantingvamp
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11 posted 2002-12-23 07:02 AM


fight fight fight, if we don't God knows what might happen....perish the thought.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

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