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Amature2
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0 posted 2002-12-16 08:44 PM



Caressed

Gazing into your eyes

I reach to touch your face

But caressed your heart instead


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-12-16 08:48 PM


This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-17 01:50 AM


that happens
BlueEyes
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3 posted 2002-12-24 11:32 AM


This was breath-takingly beautiful.....flows along the same lines as one I wrote a few months ago...

A Room full of darkness

What I long for, the touch of your hand on the small of my back…
pulling me into your arms, chest to chest, for a kiss that I wish would last forever.

To feel your touch, fingers gliding so softly against my back, feels like silk.
I feel you tracing my body with your fingers, so delicate, so gentle.

Here we are, in a room full of darkness.
But your heart permits you to see what your eyes don’t allow.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-08 04:47 PM


This is really beautiful......don't know how I missed it.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-08-2003 04:47 PM).]

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