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Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2002-12-16 08:03 PM

I sighed,
I turned away,
When I saw those wild horses,
Saw those horses and the stars
I could never ride again.

Never be normal!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2002-12-16 08:24 PM

I am definitely impressed! You say the world in those few short lines...they show wisdom beyond your years

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2002-12-16 09:52 PM

beautiful and very painful at the same time. amazing write as usual thanks.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-12-16 09:55 PM

(big hugggsssss) Oh Liz, this is beautiful but sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and know you can always ride as we are young forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-12-16 10:02 PM

Liz, this does have a sad feeling to it. I could feel a lot of emotions in it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-12-16 10:58 PM

Wonderfully written short piece. Such intricate tapestries of images in this. Loved it!!!! ***Ivy Rose

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-12-17 01:32 AM

sadly deep...or deeply sad...I dunno

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

7 posted 2002-12-17 08:59 PM

Yes, a very sad write but, makes me feel glad that I can still see horses and riders. Thank you.

etoodog

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-12-18 08:32 AM

nicely done... the use of minimilism to convey a larger emotion or theme seems to suit you...

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-12-18 09:05 AM

Good one liz, and guess whos back? hehehehehe... Ill be posting a poem here tonight, Maybe.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

10 posted 2002-12-18 10:07 AM

Don't feel sad..
Smiiiiiiiiiiile..

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-12-18 10:58 AM

enjoyed

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