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zenny
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0 posted 2002-12-16 04:10 PM


While hearing our song chearing up the space
My mind gets tricked into an endless maze
Memories and dreams acting in a play
Make me wish you’ll always be here to stay

“Thank you for loving me
For being my eyes when I couldn’t see”


Closing the window to my reality for a little while
I see, feel and smell you, which makes me smile
For the thought of us two sharing time
Gives my eyes an extra sparkling shine

The song’s now fading away
My thoughts though are here to stay
For I don’t hesitate to say I love thee
And I thank you for loving me

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

© Copyright 2002 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-12-16 08:54 PM


This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-17 01:44 AM


what a great tribute! Not too many people say thank you anymore
zenny
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3 posted 2002-12-17 09:46 AM


both thank u for the reply

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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4 posted 2002-12-17 02:58 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is an excellent response to the music challenge, sweet friend, I love Bon Jovi's "Thank You For Loving Me" also and may the song always represent a love so true! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Zenny, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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