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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-16 02:18 PM


Brown Eyed Flight

deep brown eyes
hold me
tenderly close
tightly in gaze

seeing in me believing
what no other can
and I
am amazed

looking back I glide
following the movement
of his watch
observing me

does he
not know
he is the reason
my wings fly free



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-16 03:00 PM


men are smarter than we give them credit for...yes.
Rusty
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2 posted 2002-12-16 08:02 PM


I really enjoyed this simple, but meaningful poem. This was really good. Rusty
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-12-17 10:23 AM


Helen, this is so cool. Does he, or doesn't he?
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4 posted 2002-12-17 11:07 AM


This one's true for me, too, because my Love also has brown eyes...    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-17-2002 11:08 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-12-17 12:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, my Joanna has green eyes but she makes me feel this same special way! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous love poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-12-19 11:43 AM


he does

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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