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quik
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since 2002-11-27
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Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-16 01:42 PM



I am sad that I have to go away
I am sad that I cant stay
You are the girl that look so good
And trying to get with you was the best I could
See I adore you, but I don’t know why
I guess I’ll sit here and start to cry
I just wish I didn’t have to go
Cause I wanted you to know
That I liked you a long time ago
You’re a pretty girl and you sure look good
I think you came from a good neighborhood
I don’t think other boys see you like I do
Because some boys cant get the message through
I just want you to know that I wont forget you
Your astonishing looks and your cool do
And to tell you that I care I love you so much
I just hope when we grow up we keep in touch
I love You

© Copyright 2002 Antonio Duran Weary - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-12-16 01:51 PM


The depth of your longing is almost palpable!
Very stirring write.

~ May all your dreams come true

Earth Angel

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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2 posted 2002-12-16 02:15 PM




A sad write, but with hope at the end. I hope you can keep in touch, too.


Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2002-12-16 03:06 PM


awww, it's hard to leave, I hope you guys get to stay in touch...you never know what the future brings!
Salty
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since 2002-11-23
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4 posted 2002-12-16 03:12 PM


I love the line *I don't think other boys see you like I do*  

Your into her deeper than the physical attraction. A most charming effect here.
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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5 posted 2002-12-22 03:35 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Antonio, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I too hope you two get in keep in touch as you have a golden heart that is so deserving of this love! (sigh) I wish you the best, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Antonio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21
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Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!
6 posted 2002-12-22 04:48 PM


enjoyed this read very much, made me very sad, changes are sad in and of themselves i think
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