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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-12-16 11:15 AM





Your ~Eyes Speak~

Your ~Soul Touches~

Your ~Heart Hears~

Your ~Mind Twists and Turns~

In other words,
you are all screwed up.


For someone so abnormal,
it is awesome,
just how,

Perfect You Are!


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-16 11:25 AM


ROTFL. Yep, some of us are twisted.
Good fun write.

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2 posted 2002-12-16 11:33 AM




Kacy,

Every poem is so serious on the board this morning ( but, terrific) I thought we needed a tiny touch of humor.

Thanks for responding.  

Hugs, Pat  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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3 posted 2002-12-16 11:34 AM


Pat, this is cute. I think I do all those things. And, my Dad tells me I'm "abnormal", but he thinks I'm "perfect" (?) sometimes, too.........    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2002-12-16 11:36 AM



Ethel,

You have a heart of gold and I think you are perfect just the way you are.


Hugs, Pat and thanks for replying

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-12-16 11:39 AM


This is a piece of perfection! I love how your "abnormal" mind works!

~ warm hugs, dear friend!

Linda


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6 posted 2002-12-16 11:42 AM



Linda,

~Tsk!~  and definitely: ~Ditto~!

Thanks and warm hugs to you,

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2002-12-16 12:04 PM


Pat--Thanks for the smile in this...very much enjoy the twists of your mind.  
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8 posted 2002-12-16 01:27 PM


oh Pat, this one made me giggle and smile inside.
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9 posted 2002-12-16 01:30 PM


Pat,
Funny and cute, enjoyed.  

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10 posted 2002-12-16 01:39 PM


he he, how true! loved, i'm going to show this one to the abnormal man in my life! thanks,
lots of love , gemma xxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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11 posted 2002-12-16 07:09 PM


enjoyed your smile!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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12 posted 2002-12-16 09:55 PM


Put a big smile on my face thanks
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13 posted 2002-12-16 10:48 PM



i always told my kids, dont color in the lines, (they turned out fine)
why be normal?
i liked your tossled world, can relate

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14 posted 2002-12-16 11:17 PM




(smiles) Oh Patricia, this is lovely, sweet friend, and your wonderful talent is so abnormal too, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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15 posted 2003-01-06 09:14 AM


Now how did I miss this????

The title just screamed at me...grin

back to the top you, for starting my day with a smile!

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16 posted 2003-01-06 09:18 AM


Well done to Serenity for digging this up, its nice to see it again!
love gem xxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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17 posted 2003-01-06 09:35 AM


Oh my gosh, I'm so glad this popped up! I somehow missed it when you posted it.

It's just awesome and truly a hoot!

Hugs and giggles, Marti

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18 posted 2003-01-06 10:26 AM


Another alien POV?
LOL, this is just as good on the second read.

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19 posted 2003-01-06 11:43 AM



I love this poem, friend...just as much this second go-round.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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20 posted 2003-01-06 11:48 AM



Thank goodness!

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21 posted 2003-01-06 12:19 PM


I believe you hit the head right on the nail ....lol  

huh?  did I say that somewhat "twisted"???
I enjoyed smiling at this today...thank U


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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22 posted 2003-01-06 03:50 PM


ahh, only the twisted are perfect. if you were a "normal" person, how could you possibly be perfect? very nice.
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23 posted 2003-01-06 04:42 PM


Wimmin tell me this all the time...thank you....LOL
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