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Dreaming Together |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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lightning’s blue white flash brightens night with fireworks complete with thunder romantic evening with you fire reflecting lovelights in your ember eyes the voice of the storm echoes boldly through canyons as squall line arrives secure in your loving arms desires inflame as you whisper in my ear summer surrenders electrically persuaded fall starts with a bang the touch of your lips on mine hearts beating in sync electrifying passions inevitably fall proclaims it’s full intent trees moan in the wind entwined together as one rapturous moment crying out that I love you a distant thunder rain falls softly on the roof blanketed by clouds enfolded in sweet embrace dreaming together in the tender warmth of love Poetry is: |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed the quality of this work, Blank verse always works a bit better, In my humble opinion, When held on some structure. Well done Gloom |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thanks for the read, your remarks and thoughts  Poetry is: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CSKpoet, I'm with he professor on this one, enjoyed. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cher~ I am very much enjoying your work. Another well done write here. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
another gem from your hand, enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Extremely well done Cher! Love the new pic too!  ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Cheryl, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your new picture too, you always bring paradise alive in your words, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda makes me want to crawl under the covers and dream |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cheryl, this is beautiful and so well-written. I could almost see the fireworks of the lightening. You made it all seem so real. "squeeze: "Love makes the world go around" |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thanks so much to all and yes I had to update the picture to a more "mature " me...LOL geez I hate my birthday now...they come faster than lightning and then Christmas too...  warm hugs to all you, my friends! Cher Poetry is: |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
hmmmmmmmm...love those storms, inside and out!! enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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