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Touch Me, Sweetheart
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Touch Me, Sweetheart |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Touch me, Sweetheart, with your strong, gentle hands I can FEEL your love Kiss me, my Love, with your soft, sensual lips I can TASTE your love Whisper to me in that deep, husky voice I can HEAR your love Gaze into my eyes with your beautiful brown eyes I can SEE your love Be near me, my Love with your body close to mine I can TOUCH your love I Can ~~~ FEEL TASTE HEAR SEE TOUCH ~~~ Your Love [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-16-2002 03:00 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now THIS? is the epitome of PASSION. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all the senses....great write! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Karen.......  My Love's touch IS passion.......  Thanks for reading and replying.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You know what, Dixie, I didn't even think of that until you mentioned it. It does, though, doesn't it? "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-16-2002 03:51 AM).] |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Waaaaw what a true love.. Your poem is great. I love it.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
thank you, secretlife, for reading and replying to my poem. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Smells of Love..............enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richard, thanks for reading. I'm really glad that you enjoyed. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always use all five of your senses in your gorgeous love poetry, and the sixth sense for bringing such lovely dreams alive! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But, Noah, a few times out of the month, they aren't dreams......  But, those few times a month turn into dreams, too..... I believe that yours and Joanna's dreams will become realities real soon. I like that poetic duet you and she posted. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-16-2002 10:21 AM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I believe you just hit on every aspect needed. If you can feel all that you should have a cake walk into his life. A wonderfully read write. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, now don't get too upset with me, but I have just now Felt, Tasted, Heard, Seen, and Touched Gary's love! You made me do it! It's all your fault! tehe Fantastic! ~ Sending my love to Gary--and to you, of course! Linda |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, This is simply ~Touching~ in every ~Sense~ of the word! Smiles.... Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel What a wonderful, sensory love song. Much enjoyed! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ooooh you KNOW i love this! lots of love, gemma xxxx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OHHH MYYYY YESSS!!! I love this and I'm keeping it!! ~hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Salty, That's a wonderful idea. Thank you, friend. Linda, I wouldn't ever get upset with you, sweet lady. Thank you. Pat, Thank you. I liked your new poem, too. Marti, Thank you for calling it a love song. Our love feels like a song. Gemma, Thank you. I'm glad that you love it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, (sorry I missed you before) I'm really glad that you like my poem and that you're "keeping" it. That makes me feel good. Thank you, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I never thought I could touch my toes with my tongue....I wuz wrong!!!  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ethel This was so well written and your words were overflowing with love. Wishing you much love and happiness in the New Year and always. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - a touch like this would be a touch indeed... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Balladeer?? HeeHee!!!   "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue Thank you so much. I hope that you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, too..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
So much for the sense of smell when that love gets a little sweaty eh? lol just kidding lovely write Ethel thanks raph |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, thank you for reading and replying to my poem. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-16-2002 09:57 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Whoa! Ethel this is amazing passion and romance. I just love all the romance that dripping around here lately. PHEW!! Huggles, Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, thankl you for reading and for your loving reply... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
All the senses, makes sense to me! Very sweet! Cor |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ethel~ I LOVE this. Such a beautiful and passionate write this is. Wonderfully done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, thank you for letting me know that you made sense out of it, and thank you for reading it. I really appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, thank you very much for reading and for you sweet comments. Much appreciated.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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