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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-16 12:45 PM

Give Me You

I need to soar lend me your wings
I am crying, do not pull your hand away
I feel lost, find me the path to your door
I am just me and I need you to stay

Give me you, and I will love you
Give me you, and you will find me

You feel hurt, I am still here
You cannot forgive, see the pain I carry
You are my tears, and my aches
You are the fresh water of life

Give me you, and I will love you
Give me you, and you will be free

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-12-16 03:31 AM

Oh Gosh...how could anyone refuse that?

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

2 posted 2002-12-16 04:13 AM

What a strong love. Perfect words..
I love it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-16 06:26 PM

Daniel~
This is a beautiful write and filled with such love.
Very nicely penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-12-16 06:45 PM

Beautiful penned, as always Daniel !!

Charisma

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-12-22 03:49 PM

(sigh) Your heart shines with such a chivalrous and pure love, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssssss) May she always feel free with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!