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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-15 10:58 PM

baby, its cold,
and this torch inside
burning of madness and desire,
just wont warm
that empty ache filling the bed tonight......

its decembers harsh chill
setting in as its days near the end,
its 2 am,
and the winds crying
all thru the night,
in a seductive song of me and you
so sweet and sad and cruel,
this hit and run love,
how you invade my heart
and ravage my soul
and make me yours,
over and over
only to leave again,

the song plays louder now
in the nights deep silence,
and i feel like im losing my mind
and i dont know why i got it so bad
for you,
tonight,
but its decembers harsh chill
as the year nears its end,
its 3am and
i ache and long for you

and i want to close the windows,
and make the crying go away,
but choose to just let it be,
as i know ill never catch the wind
but the song that plays beside it
is somewhere i could find your love for now

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-15 11:02 PM

inkedgoddess -

and i want to close the windows,
and make the crying go away,
but choose to just let it be,
as i know ill never catch the wind
but the song that plays beside it
is somewhere i could find your love for now

'if the window were open
and the warm breeze touched your face
it would be I on the wind
singing of times wanted, times to be
and loves embrace would be within...'

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-15 11:10 PM

thanks, bill
thats really sweet, and i think the inkedgirl
just blushed.......

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2002-12-15 11:16 PM

hit and run love,

Yeah that's just about what it feels like , except most hit and runs end with death whereas these feelings linger on forever..

raph

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-12-15 11:20 PM

yes, i know aenimal,
they hurt so bad and so good all at once,
because they make you feel alive,open and vulnerable

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-16 03:14 AM

exactly how i feel right now, good write!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2002-12-16 09:52 AM

intense... those feelings and a bit like one is starving and can not find the way to satisfy the hunger.....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-12-16 09:56 AM

Inkedgoddess, this is beautiful, but in a sad way. I enjoyed reading it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-12-16 06:39 PM

inkedgoddess~
This is such an emotional write...it just aches,
and you've expressed the feelings well.
This grabbed me and had me hanging on every word.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-16-2002 06:41 PM).]

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

9 posted 2002-12-18 05:58 PM

emotions explode in this one, agree with Cpat, sounds hungry--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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