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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-15 09:30 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

A room full of candles
Satin sheets on the bed
The color of our love nest
Is a passionate shade of red

Rose oil fills our senses
As your touch ignites my fire
I feel love take effect
With a deep and burning desire

Every love song I hear
Reminds me of you
As I look into your eyes
A deep sapphire blue

How sensual are your hands
As I respond to your touch
Such feelings are exquisite
That it's almost too much

Temperatures are rising
Beads of sweat move down my chest
Your hands move from my shoulders
On soft mounds they now rest

Love courses through my body
Throughout each and every vein
As my passion reaches its peak
I start calling out your name

Your love fills me completely
To your love I am a slave
As the night turns into morning
More of your love I will crave

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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1 posted 2002-12-15 09:36 PM


I think Al Pacino said it best in Scent of a Woman...
"Hoooowah!"

Passionate to say the least

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston
2 posted 2002-12-15 10:15 PM


Very Nice! I truly enjoyed this.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-15 10:43 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, such passion fills your words, you always write of love and romance so gorgeously, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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4 posted 2002-12-15 11:03 PM


Suetang - very warm and touching write, I like it, I like the romance of it very much...

BC

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5 posted 2002-12-16 01:04 AM


Beautiful. Just plain beautiful

"it was cute, it was like he was shy and didn't want to make it too obvious"
~ Reena
I'm Rhondiforous!

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
6 posted 2002-12-16 01:28 AM


Beautifully sensuous and lush, Sue...
I enjoyed it very much
~ loving chipmunk hugs
sue...

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-12-16 02:22 AM


Oh yes, Sue, another one for my library....
Thank you so much for sharing with us.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2002-12-16 03:25 AM


Sue, you are so romantic...maybe you should be my teacher...I need some lessons.
Goodknight
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Ohio, USA
9 posted 2002-12-16 09:54 AM


Wonderful passionate romance Sue - loved it - Paul
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