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KAM39
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0 posted 09-19-2014 04:58 PM       View Profile for KAM39   Email KAM39   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KAM39


You mock the truth that was here before you and will be here long after

You bite the hand that feeds you, snickering at the heart ache

You spit at cleanliness and chastise the cleaner

you lead the children into darkness, cackling at their fear

You devour the joy of life with your greed and selfishness

You have no fear of justice nor do you believe it will come to pass

You have no remorse, hardened heart, blinded by lust

You

you

you

you

you

YOU!!

you are me

Before i surrendered to the King.


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Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 09-22-2014 08:15 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

There is a crescendo of accusation and the conclusion is a surprise that works well and more so it is very comforting. Awakening to Love is a divine grace really.

Well done.

Margherita
jjote
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2 posted 01-14-2015 12:34 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Confronting one's weaknesses and submitting them to the all-forgiving One is a sign of spiritual strength. Keep the faith.
JamesMichael
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Amen...james
 
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