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KAM39
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0 posted 2014-09-19 04:58 PM



You mock the truth that was here before you and will be here long after

You bite the hand that feeds you, snickering at the heart ache

You spit at cleanliness and chastise the cleaner

you lead the children into darkness, cackling at their fear

You devour the joy of life with your greed and selfishness

You have no fear of justice nor do you believe it will come to pass

You have no remorse, hardened heart, blinded by lust

You

you

you

you

you

YOU!!

you are me

Before i surrendered to the King.



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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2014-09-22 08:15 AM


There is a crescendo of accusation and the conclusion is a surprise that works well and more so it is very comforting. Awakening to Love is a divine grace really.

Well done.

Margherita

jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2015-01-14 12:34 PM


Confronting one's weaknesses and submitting them to the all-forgiving One is a sign of spiritual strength. Keep the faith.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-10-07 08:49 PM


Amen...james
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