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Messengers of God

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Radrook
Between dimensions

Angels flitter like shooting

Stars to realms unknown
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Margherita
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Beautiful thought and lovely imagery!

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A delightful senryu; perhaps a bit of punctuation could enhance it, such as:

Between dimensions,
Angels flitter like shooting...
Stars to realms unknown!

-Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
 
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