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To wake up in a dream
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To wake up in a dream |
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HippinTrippy Member
since 2010-03-26
Posts 103New York 
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It's been a while since I've posted anything.. A lot has changed since then. I met someone wonderful and I quit smoking, so expect some more writing to be done in the near future. I started this in the spur of a moment, I want to add onto it yet but the rest has yet to come to me. To wake up in a dream Being with you is unreal Easily some of the best feelings I've ever had the pleasure to feel What can I say about your eyes That I have not said before Every time I gaze at them I fall for you even more You inspire such great feelings ...The words do not exist The softest skin I've touched The sweetest lips I've kissed I feel so much better always Knowing you love me too We're going to be together Whatever I have to do Being with you is magical And you've got me under your spell The feelings that I have for you I'll never be able to tell I can only hope that you feel them I will try my hardest to show And for every second spent with you My feelings only grow The night you said you love me That moment was So intense! I thought about it for a moment It was the only thing that made sense When I said I love you back I'm so glad you didn't explode As I held you in my arms that night Your heart and mine were sewed. It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell. |
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HippinTrippy Member
since 2010-03-26
Posts 103New York |
This may not seem like the typical "Spiritual Journey" that most of you seem to be writing about.. But I can assure you that with this girl we have seen, felt, thought, and gone places that people study and search and strive for, Their Entire Lives! She truly is mother earth, We've had thoughts and conversations that lead to such happiness that we were both crying histaricly.. It was the most beautiful sight I had ever seen.. National Geographic couldn't have done better. It truly was a revelation. A "Spiritual Journey" if you will.. Together we have discovered true happiness, what it means to be human. ( What it should mean ) Life, Love, Happiness.. It's all so simple if you just take a moment to embrace it. She gives my life purpose. That night also gave my life new purpose. I need to share this feeling with as many people as possible, and this is my start. I hope you enjoyed the write, it came long before this specific night I speak of, I cannot wait to write another. Be happy, Spread love, We are all one. ~ Joshua It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Joshua, this is a very beautiful poem... and after your reply, I can unsderstand why you posted it in the spiritual forum. I doubt it's going to draw too much of an audience in here though to be honest with you. While this forum isn't reserved to poetry based on Christian and/or other religious beliefs, those seems to be the most frequent posters in here. It can be moved to the Open Poetry forum if you like, you just need to email the forum moderator. All of that said, I would like to reiterate how beautiful this was. I loved the flow, and the rhyme. I don't see enough of that these days... And the feeling just pours through. Very enjoyable read. Michael |
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HippinTrippy Member
since 2010-03-26
Posts 103New York |
Michael, thank you so very much for your uplifting reply. As well as your words of advice. I am sure that this would probably be read more in another part of the forum, but I don't think I could have a better impact on the readers in the section. ~ I think out of everyone on this site, the people in this section should know what I've felt more than anyone. People need to realise, WE are "God" We create our own reality with every breath. True happiness comes from within, sometimes we seek it in other forms or people, but that can only help to show us that is and has been within ourselves the entire time. I think I will leave it here for a while, perhaps someday I will try and have it moved so that it can hopefully inspire or enlighten people searching for other things. Thank you again, you've made my day much better with your thoughts. Peace and love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Being with you is magical And you've got me under your spell The feelings that I have for you I'll never be able to tell You conveyed those feelings quite well in this beautiful poem! It's a delight to read!  |
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HippinTrippy Member
since 2010-03-26
Posts 103New York |
Thank you for your kind words Suthern, I am glad you've enjoyed it. It seems everyone ( including her ) enjoys this more than I. Granted I am the biggest critique when it comes to my poetry, but especially about someone I love.. These words don't touch the feelings I have for her, and I'm not sure I'll ever string together any that even come close to capturing it. I may even have to completely change how I write in order to do so.. But there will be more to come for sure, she is the best inspiration I've had by far. Thanks again friend. =) |
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