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SUPERSAINT71
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0 posted 2010-10-12 08:01 AM



Momentos of a clouded past adorn the walls
Like trophies from some secret ill-gotten gain
Here no sound of toil masks distant falls
As children find it difficult to refrain
From showing reverence and respect
To a life which they are unable to connect.

The museum is a perpetual living history
A reminder of a way of life that used to be
Where events are a continual living mystery
As man strives to find the eternal key
To unlock a past so rich and mesmerising
The intricate tapestry being so awe-inspiring.

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1 posted 2010-10-12 12:08 PM


Welcome to Passions, I know you will enjoy it here.

This poem reminds me of a time in a museum I actually looked at a huge tapestry and wished it could tell the tale of its weaving.  Well done indeed.

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2 posted 2010-10-12 12:21 PM


Ahh, Daryn...

I shouldn't be surprised that a poem
about a museum is placed in the Spiritual Forum,as the forum's name itself can
consist of various forms of spirituality.

Welcome to Passions!

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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

sandgrain
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3 posted 2010-10-31 09:46 PM


Ah, a museum, much like poetry, conjures up different assumptions to varied visitors.  
Your wording is most pleasing in this introductory piece.

Welcome!

God bless,
Rae

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