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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2010-05-22 04:27 PM


The influence of the wooing...
and the folly of the youth...
the beginning of the ending
revealing of the truth

the treading and tripping
falling down and getting up
the anger and the rage
the pouring of the cups

the dynasty rising
castles crumbling to the ground
all is well that ends well
the second go around

the trumpeting of the angels
roaring thru the sky
the booming voice of justice
as another angel cries

the forgiveness of the wicked
the past has returned again
starving for salvation
and remembering when...

evil begets evil
until Jesus returns again....





~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (05-23-2010 01:00 PM).]

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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
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1 posted 2010-05-22 10:08 PM


I liked it...good flow...and the end is very true..ww
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2010-05-23 12:59 PM


Thank you it jus sorta came to me ... i built it off the first two phrases ... thnx 4 ur comments

~~~kingsangel~~~

Prats
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since 2010-12-16
Posts 74

3 posted 2010-12-17 07:39 AM


awesome expression of d truth...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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4 posted 2011-02-14 01:51 PM


Thanx glad I stopped by the forums today!!!! Had a little inspiration!! I don't post here very often but I plan to more often!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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