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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 05-22-2010 04:27 PM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angel4aKing

The influence of the wooing...
and the folly of the youth...
the beginning of the ending
revealing of the truth

the treading and tripping
falling down and getting up
the anger and the rage
the pouring of the cups

the dynasty rising
castles crumbling to the ground
all is well that ends well
the second go around

the trumpeting of the angels
roaring thru the sky
the booming voice of justice
as another angel cries

the forgiveness of the wicked
the past has returned again
starving for salvation
and remembering when...

evil begets evil
until Jesus returns again....





~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (05-23-2010 01:00 PM).]

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whisperingwalt
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1 posted 05-22-2010 10:08 PM       View Profile for whisperingwalt   Email whisperingwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for whisperingwalt

I liked it...good flow...and the end is very true..ww
Angel4aKing
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2 posted 05-23-2010 12:59 PM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel4aKing

Thank you it jus sorta came to me ... i built it off the first two phrases ... thnx 4 ur comments

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