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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
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Coquitlam, BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-04-30 05:26 PM


Awareness

When I was younger
I heard his whisper
Then I began to think
I thought about this
I thought about that
Then I began to do
Do what I should
Do what I could
Do whatever I wanted
As the years went by
My life became complicated
My thoughts so sophisticated
Like the infamous Titanic
I hit the iceberg of humility
My ego sunk
Fear paid me a visit
Despair sent his regards
Yet in the midnight of my soul
I went for a walkabout
And as looked to the sky
The stars twinkled brightly back
As God smiled at me
In that moment of being
I once again heard his whisper....
.....My love is.


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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
1 posted 2010-05-04 08:43 AM


I guess people pretty much do what they want at times.  But God is forgiving if we are truely sorry.  Nice poem.
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2 posted 2010-05-04 01:05 PM


You need a special ear to hear a whisper, especially his.  Well done!

Welcome to Passions - hope to read more of your work.


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