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I once found something that made sense
But I heard fools always believe
In their naive state of mind
Every lie working a way to deceive

True others believed the stories
And I had hope with all my heart
That the wise man's words were true
But doubt twisted me and contort

My hope was broken among the thorns
An empty feeling took its place
People casting their shame
Leaving me a target in disgrace

Where are my broken shards?
Where is that forsaken hope
I need some refugee
Some words to help me cope

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This is the first time I have read any of your poetry. I really don't feel qualified to comment on your poem. It seems as if it talks about a place within you, that you are questioning. Only you know what that is.
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Anyone can be qualified to read ones poetry. There are no standards to for fill. But I understand what you mean. Thank you for reading!
 
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