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Werd Na Rumboe
Junior Member
since 2009-10-13
Posts 21


0 posted 2009-10-28 05:34 PM



COOL RIBBONS


silk cold ribbons of water, cool—
shall swathe the swimmers
and all who bathe with...
tho never did she speak of, or
quiver to sigh...
…..such ribbons in a river today—
if only a canoe, or dreams to flow
and stay, she plead with anchored heels
stay and bathe by the river
clean my navel, rinse my divide
…...tomorrow always, our sorrows shall fall

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booky1940!
Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136
Canada
1 posted 2009-10-28 06:22 PM


"Cool Ribbons" To me, it seems a very deep poem, and it could have many meanings. However, whether I fully understand it or not, its a poem, keep on writing.
Booky1940!  

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