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Werd Na Rumboe
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COOL RIBBONS


silk cold ribbons of water, cool—
shall swathe the swimmers
and all who bathe with...
tho never did she speak of, or
quiver to sigh...
…..such ribbons in a river today—
if only a canoe, or dreams to flow
and stay, she plead with anchored heels
stay and bathe by the river
clean my navel, rinse my divide
…...tomorrow always, our sorrows shall fall

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"Cool Ribbons" To me, it seems a very deep poem, and it could have many meanings. However, whether I fully understand it or not, its a poem, keep on writing.
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