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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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He was but a simpleton
So lovely in that
He would never question them
Never said a word
Then the whispers came
Such a shame when they came
For the simpleton became a brute
Took the village by the sword
Though he never did say a word

He was a lost soul
Never one to hesitate to complain
About misfortunes in his name
She held his hand through the harsh land
With her guidance he became a man
Took the lead of a thousand to come
They called him a god, well- At least some.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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1 posted 10-27-2009 11:08 AM       View Profile for AncientHippie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AncientHippie

Very clever and astute analogy, LostPoet.  Very much appreciate and good for several reads.
Cheers

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment

 
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