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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2009-09-30 11:24 AM








As we are traveling through from mortal to divine, keep your eyes upon the portal, on the distant hidden line that, when drawn between the masses, will, in itself, define which ones of us are risen and which are left behind.










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1 posted 2009-09-30 07:36 PM


Loved your use of a straight line too Bob, this gets the message out loud and clear.  

        
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Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2009-10-02 11:44 AM


Thank you Sharon,

This was a very quickly written poem that I originally wrote in regular format, but, then, I thought, hey, wait a minute, writing this as a single line would really do well to emphasize the message here, soooooo, Ta-Da! Here it is! Anyway, I really do appreciate that you agree that the way this poem is formatted helps to get its message across.


Hip-Hip-Hooray and God bless,

-Bob


sandgrain
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3 posted 2009-10-03 11:15 PM


I totally agree, Bob.  Brilliant thought!

Thanks for sharing it.

God bless,
Rae

2dalimit
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4 posted 2009-10-04 05:48 AM


...keep your eyes upon the portal...

Excellent.
Thanks, Melton

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2009-10-05 04:32 PM


Rae, thank for your encouraging words of appreciation and, Melton, agreeing with a big smile, I certainly will do that!

God bless to both of you,

-Bob


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