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Lighthousebob
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As we are traveling through from mortal to divine, keep your eyes upon the portal, on the distant hidden line that, when drawn between the masses, will, in itself, define which ones of us are risen and which are left behind.









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1 posted 09-30-2009 07:36 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Loved your use of a straight line too Bob, this gets the message out loud and clear.  

        
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2 posted 10-02-2009 11:44 AM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Thank you Sharon,

This was a very quickly written poem that I originally wrote in regular format, but, then, I thought, hey, wait a minute, writing this as a single line would really do well to emphasize the message here, soooooo, Ta-Da! Here it is! Anyway, I really do appreciate that you agree that the way this poem is formatted helps to get its message across.


Hip-Hip-Hooray and God bless,

-Bob

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3 posted 10-03-2009 11:15 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

I totally agree, Bob.  Brilliant thought!

Thanks for sharing it.

God bless,
Rae
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4 posted 10-04-2009 05:48 AM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

...keep your eyes upon the portal...

Excellent.
Thanks, Melton
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5 posted 10-05-2009 04:32 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Rae, thank for your encouraging words of appreciation and, Melton, agreeing with a big smile, I certainly will do that!

God bless to both of you,

-Bob

 
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