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jjbreunig3
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since 2009-07-29
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0 posted 2009-08-22 08:49 AM

Unfinished is the fine tuning of me,
as I perform in this human drama,
which is covered by a spiritual mystery.

Participating without a script,
I'm stumbling forward in a lifelong excursion,
although I'm not fully equipped.

In this paradise, that's known as Earth,
I'm a curious child of wonderment
and working towards my supernatural rebirth.

Despite my growth of understanding,
I will always be an adolescent boy of His -
Forever dependent on God (while I'm here living).

Unfinished is the beauty of my tapestry
until I can achieve the final conclusion
that is... Permanently me.


Learn more about me and my poetry at:
http://www.squidoo.com/book-isbn-1419650513/

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd
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