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jjbreunig3
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0 posted 08-11-2009 09:27 AM       View Profile for jjbreunig3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit jjbreunig3's Home Page   View IP for jjbreunig3


Once my earthly journey is complete,
humbly I'll stand before Your judgment seat.
So in advance I faithfully pray to have
a positive ruling for you to mete.

Grace and mercy carried me;
Your covering on my life you should see.
Hopefully You'll remember that I
promoted Your Kingdom for eternity.

Despite flaws and failures absurd,
hidden in my heart is Your Holy Word.
An attitude of lifelong praise I've spoken
based on what I've learned and heard.

With an inkling of spiritual clues,
I'm thankful for knowing You
and looking forward to that fateful day
when my life will be ready, for Your Review.
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Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

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peaceseaker
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1 posted 08-11-2009 10:06 AM       View Profile for peaceseaker   Email peaceseaker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peaceseaker

I found this to be a very heartfelt write...true to what appears to be your nature and spirit....well done....peaceseaker
deleeme
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2 posted 08-11-2009 03:40 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

I think this is a good poem, seeking and doingf all within our power to be under His Grace that we may be forgiven for our failures and be acquitted of sin which Jesus died for on the cruel cross.  This is an appointment, like death that we all have[Hebrews 9:27), so we all need to give it some serious thought and preparation, even as your poem suggests.[Mark 8:36-39]

Thanks for the solemn reminder!
  David

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

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