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FAITH (An Acrostic)

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peaceseaker
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FAITH (An Acrostic)

Feel and believe, you are not alone
And understand He's always near.
In times of trouble and great loss,
There is light, brigthter than the stars
He gives us breath in every storm




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1 posted 08-01-2009 02:29 PM       View Profile for peaceseaker   Email peaceseaker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peaceseaker

hmmm....no comment's huh?
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I like what you've written, but the poem seems incomplete; perhaps you could consider adding additional stanzas that continue to "spell out" F-A-I-T-H or "spell out" a message, such as F-A-I-T-H I-S ... --Joe

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

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Hi..I appreciate you reading and commenting..however this was meant to be as an Acrostic is done..just using the word Faith....Glad you liked....PS
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4 posted 08-11-2009 03:44 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

I Like acrostics especially spiritual ones.  I appreciate your acrostic on faith.
Keep up the good work!
  David

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

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