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FAITH (An Acrostic)

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

0 posted 2009-07-30 02:08 PM

FAITH (An Acrostic)

Feel and believe, you are not alone
And understand He's always near.
In times of trouble and great loss,
There is light, brigthter than the stars
He gives us breath in every storm

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

1 posted 2009-08-01 02:29 PM

hmmm....no comment's huh?

jjbreunig3
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 423
Maine, USA

2 posted 2009-08-11 09:36 AM

I like what you've written, but the poem seems incomplete; perhaps you could consider adding additional stanzas that continue to "spell out" F-A-I-T-H or "spell out" a message, such as F-A-I-T-H I-S ... --Joe

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

3 posted 2009-08-11 09:58 AM

Hi..I appreciate you reading and commenting..however this was meant to be as an Acrostic is done..just using the word Faith....Glad you liked....PS

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

4 posted 2009-08-11 03:44 PM

I Like acrostics especially spiritual ones. I appreciate your acrostic on faith.
Keep up the good work!
David

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

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