The Full Moon Aug 13th 2008

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The Full Moon Aug 13th 2008

Markus
Junior Member

since 2008-12-19

Posts 22

0 posted 2008-12-19 04:06 PM

Standing on the edge of Hollywood Beach
Looking up into the scattered Void,
Tonight the Full Moon burning in
the sky, faint, wispy, translucent clouds
soaring across light flickered moonlight rainbows,
the ocean lashing, thrashing violently against the shore,
dark green sparks popping burning out, blinding, rushing
cascading water, blasting wind, palm trees bowing, swaying
dancing before me

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-12-19 11:20 PM

Markus~
Write the moon ... and you capture my attention~

'Tonight the Full Moon burning in
the sky, faint, wispy, translucent clouds
soaring across light flickered moonlight rainbows,
the ocean lashing, thrashing violently against the shore

The internal rhyme of "lashing", "thrashing" causes me
to pause in ponder at the beauty of the entire write~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2008-12-26 12:19 PM

Excellent flow in this piece very well penned and very easy and pleasant to read

Well penned thank for sharing

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