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Vestibular Bard
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0 posted 2008-12-12 07:55 AM


Why Pray?
- by The Vestibular Bard

It seems quite odd, we pray, 'to' god,
This being of omnipresence……
We bend a knee, respectfully,
And proceed with our pretense.
Some thing we’ll mention, needs his attention,
Or we’ll repent for some offense…
We treat this god, like some poor sod,
Not imbued with omni-sense.
It seems to me, quite lit'rally,
That if this god is whom they say……
Our every thought, and feeling ought
to displace our need to pray.

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1 posted 2008-12-12 10:51 PM


Why would the divine mind
knowing everything
need us I pray
to pray?
At the risk of sounding
too simplistic:
The need resides elsewhere
and right at home
for mortals invited
to an eternal dance
those who might learn
by surrendering
struggling
entreating
praising.
It's like asking
Why on earth
should our children recite
vainly and wearily
the Alphabet to us
when we already know it
by heart,
And can string words
(or worlds)
together like pearls?


Stephen

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2 posted 2008-12-13 10:22 AM


Not surprisingly,
It is always the chatty,
Insightful, confident
And oh so…
Spiritual 'children',
Who inhabit,
The oft abused and hackneyed,
Analogy.
It is always they,
That  must speak,
For the ever muted,
‘divine mind’,
Of their silent,
And invisible,
Daddy.
They keep repeating,
Their faithful ‘ABCs’,
Over and over,
In a bizarre,
Self serving ritual,
All their lives.
Which always end,
With a firm and smug,
Pat on the back,
And the selfish, imagined,
Immortality…
They crave.

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3 posted 2008-12-13 09:51 PM


Some question marks are bent
with a determined hook
baited inquiry dangling
not for consideration
or friendly exploration
but a catch on which
to vent one's own
embittered offense
oft not without good reason
some painful season
or unsalted sainthood
fallen from a critic's graces
Still there are other places
other vantage points
from which to think afresh
what these questions have to do
with digging pits
to fall into
Perhaps everyone
could look
anew.

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4 posted 2008-12-13 11:22 PM


and I'm just sitting pondering
how difficult the task must be
to spread Good News sans the judgement
and assumptions that which must
accompany the compulsion
which must prompt some who 'know' to nudge
another off the path of which
does not follow those who wish
that all who do not think like them
surely must be living sin--
I thought our flesh must make us kin,
equally in need of love
forgiveness and that hope above,
even as below, we strive
to keep that flame of trust alive.

If you are encased in skin?
Judge me not and be my friend.
For yes, I do have mote in eye,
but beams are known to make one blind.

My tears will soon enough reveal
the truth as motes are mere dust-beams,
and all of life is suffering
so I'll assume you're offering
the best intentions without pride
companionship as we all ride
upon the Earth, that might be mote
aside some other being's nose.

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5 posted 2008-12-13 11:45 PM


"You are the apple of my eye"


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6 posted 2008-12-13 11:54 PM


Merry Christmas, Stephan.

And happiest of holly-daze to you too, VB.

sigh

I'm actually craving egg-nog now. *chuckle*

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7 posted 2008-12-14 09:33 AM


You do not need to pretend,
that everything beautiful,
is a gift from your personal god.
And that everything painful,
destructive, and bleak,
is a demonic force of some evil spirit,
or a sinful man.

You just need to live…
and strive, and grow, and learn,
and love, and be loved.
You need to celebrate life,
respect her countless forms,
accept her endless cycle,
of birth and death,
and revere the awesome universe
that is her home.

You must be satisfied
to take your place,
and find your way,
and leave your small mark,
while this brief spotlight of time,
shines down upon you.

Tell me about your pain and sorrows,
and I will tell you mine.
Tell me how your god has saved you.
That he will someday take your essence,
to a place where life is always fair,
idyllic, and painless.
A place where justice prevails for all eternity,
A place where there is only Truth, Light and Love;
Pretentiously capitalized, for pompous emphasis
A magical place where all life’s questions and injustices,
will finally be answered, and made right.

I will tell you this is not life.
It is not 'good news'...
It is a silly, sacred illusion,
of something else.
Something selfish and easy...
A faux balm for your boundless,  mortal human ego

Then I will tell you,
how understanding,
accepting and revering,
the divinity of this world and life,
that I have found,
for what it simply is…
...gives me a sense of peace.

How this serenity has saved me,
from the countless, incoherent illusions,
my fellow man invents,
to reconstruct his universe,
into one designed to make him immortal
and justified, and triumphant,
in his own haughty mind.

God is love and god is hate.
Fear and courage
Pride and humility
Knowledge and ignorance
Shepherd and sheep
Light and darkness
Proton and electron
A glorious sunrise, and the hurricane’s wind
A long life of accomplishment,
and one cut short by painful death

God is paradox
God is balance,
and never ending change.
God is our reality,
we must learn to accept her,
understand her terms,
and respect her with our decisions.

For god is not hidden in the shadows.
She is not only found
in the words of ancient men,
or serendipitous good fortune.
She does not come,
only in dreams and visions,
to a chosen few in Palestine…

God is standing right in front of you.
She is revealed to all living things,
in countless ways.
Open your eyes and caress her with your spirit,
explore her with your mind,
revere her awesome wonders with sacred love,
For you only have this one chance,
to dance with her,
while the spotlight shines upon you.

[This message has been edited by Vestibular Bard (12-14-2008 10:21 AM).]

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8 posted 2008-12-14 10:05 AM


For Stephenos

Some question marks are rhetorical.
They are meant to open the eyes,
Of those who never question,
Who never wonder,
Who read the books their fathers read,
And bow their heads in unison
When they are told.

The messenger is often reviled
Once the questions are asked
And the herd becomes uncomfortable
For millennia, those who dared to ask
Were simply trampled by the heard.
Now they are simply called;
Embittered,
Fallen,
Unsalted saints,
Apostates…
Who would cause the good and faithful,
To stumble,
From their ever righteous path.

Thus was born the apologist.
The clever tongue,
Who can mock the truth,
And soothe the herd,
With wretched analogies
And prosaic rhetoric.

But the truth outlives apologists,
And their ancient, apocalyptic, franchised cults.
The real truth is patient,
It cares not what any man thinks,
Or what idols he may worship,
What gods he prays to,
Or what things he considers ‘moral’ and ‘sinful’
For these things,
Are always changing,
And that is a part of the truth,
That the pious man just can’t accept,
Even though it is obvious,
And writ large in their own sacred tomes.

The truth doesn’t have to ‘return’,
In some spectacular display,
Of cosmic judgment.
It judges every moment of every day.
It was here,
Before man invented gods in his image,
And it will be here long after,
Man is extinct.
The truth doesn’t pretend to be ‘Good News’,
It doesn’t even pretend to be ‘new’,
And it cares not,
If you embrace it and pray to it.
Or curse its name.

Perhaps there are some questions,
In the polite confines,
Of righteous and genteel society,
That shouldn’t be asked.
They are far too disturbing to contemplate.

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9 posted 2008-12-14 10:12 AM


The Bible starts with one infamous lie:
Creation didn’t end on the sixth day;
For God creates, it goes on still today.

And while some rabbi preach in synaguoges
And Christians kneel besides a pew to pray
From God teem creatures born to see the day.

To pray in words or not is optional
But in thy work and daily interaction
I beg to see Christ’s teachings’ incarnation.

For when a living creature thou have harmed
I tell you truly, thou have spat on God
It matters not if thou do God belaud.

Nice introductory poem, Vestibular. And very inspiring! It makes me want to work on the theme at a deeper level. By all means keep posting such verse   Have a nice day! Mark

[This message has been edited by Marc-Andre (12-14-2008 12:02 PM).]

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10 posted 2008-12-14 10:19 AM


My goals are not so lofty, or ambiguous.
I would be satisfied,
If my leaders upheld the Constitution,
And my fellow citizens obeyed the law.

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11 posted 2008-12-14 11:35 AM


THE VESTIBULAR BARD'S JUDGEMENT - one act play

Heaven.
Enter God, St.Peter, Jesus and an Angel.

God: What? Haven’t thou dispatched this misfit Bard to hell?

St. Peter: I have, my Lord. Only, Lucifer, crawling on his belly and biting dust, begs you to reconsider his case.

Angel: My Lord, I have reviewed the whole life of the Vestibular Bard. Truly, he has sinned but little and actually should be canonised.

God: Has he not questionned my infinite virtue?

Jesus: So have Elijah and Jacob challenged you. Likewise, the Vestibular Bard has repented of his sins and now begs to praise you eternally.

Angel: We’d love to see his poetic skills employed to such a noble cause.

Jesus: For them sinners, I have been crucified. I prithee, Father, do accept him in our kingdom.

God: Well…

St.Peter: Also, my Lord, please consider that we do not want such a bard to serve Lucifer…

God: True, true. It might be that we’ll welcome the Vestibular Bard in heaven, after probation in the vestibule. One last confirmation: Is he of our chosen few? Has he been circumcised, accordingly to my covenant?

Angel: Well, my Lord, I’m afraid he…

God: Case dismissed! Let him burn in hell!

                             Exeunt.


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12 posted 2008-12-14 01:59 PM


Ironically enough, I have been circumcised. Alas, not by a holy man, or for the right reasons. Nevermind...I enjoy the warm weather.

I very much enjoyed your play Marc.


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13 posted 2008-12-14 02:03 PM


Let's face it: not accordingly to the covenant, thou art doomed...I'm glad you liked the play, Vestibular. And happier still to know that I will have access to your verse in hell Have a wonderful day! Mark
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14 posted 2008-12-14 02:46 PM


"You just need to live…
and strive, and grow, and learn,
and love, and be loved.
You need to celebrate life,
respect her countless forms,
accept her endless cycle,
of birth and death,
and revere the awesome universe
that is her home."




"God is standing right in front of you.
She is revealed to all living things,

* * *

And to you, dear Bard, and to you!



Um, you did know that I am Wiccan, right?



* * *

(Sorry for jumping in there like I owned the place--Stephanos and I have a such a long history of bumping heads, why, you could almost call it eternal...)

*chuckle*

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15 posted 2008-12-14 03:04 PM


"Um, you did know that I am Wiccan, right?"

I did not know...but suddenly it all makes sense now....

I am not a Wiccan, and I try not to be a member of any group that ends in:
...ist, an, ant, rat, al, ive, rian,...or 'sexual'.

Although I will under duress confess to being a human.

I am a citizen of the universe...

...and my own mind is my church.

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16 posted 2008-12-15 11:36 PM


Though many be unquestioning
followers of dogma perhaps
only because they were taught it
never weaned from the paps
of mere convention and creed
(and of such a season there is a need
in every truth religious or no)
others have asked hard questions
either posed by others or from within
their own wayfaring hearts
and have still come to a positive
faithful and most orthodox conclusion
That God is no idiot's delusion
but was and is and forever will be
the savior of their humanity.
For such have come to realize
the abjuring and alternate view
is something like a faith-leap too.
For some skeptic tongues will even speak
of "truth" and of "setting free" the weak
who are preyed upon by zealots
and immoral religious deceivers
manufacturing believers for their own
self-absorbed and hoarded gain
And I despise it as much as they,
all the "don't do as I do"
and "Just do what I say".
But to reject the only Cradle-Hill
from which reform could ever cry
or even make any sense
of any prescription 'ere you die
to appeal to paradox and then
turn 'round and preach religious sin
to have 'ought' hid in every verse
but declaring there really only 'is'.  
To say blessings are only apparant
while tough times are divine arraignment
at the bar of what is "right"
and humanly self-evident
affirming the strand of art and intelligence
through nature only mirage
and something like pyrite in the 'Pan'
but blasphemy smart, rational, bold
and fairly free of difficulties
(well, since difficulties don't really matter
in the shadow of absolute death)
Yes the problems of faith are mystifying
and present one with a life-time of wrestling
but the problems of the alternative
are damning and for some
call for just a bit too much
of something like a faith-leap too.
There are difficult questions for me and you.

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17 posted 2008-12-16 09:36 AM


Stephan,

For the record, after having thorougly and meticously questioned your own personal brand of religious dogma, have you ever come to the conclusion that any of your superstitious beliefs, are an 'idiot's delusion'?

If so, which ones are in that category?

Would you also mind weighing in on whether Shiva, is really the Lord of the dance, the all knowing, (originally called Rudra), god of fire? Is this god really male and female at the same time, and the true god of creation, destruction, and maintenance?

Once again, thanks for helping us seperate memorized dogma, from closely examined religious 'truth', that only an insightful theologian like you would discern.



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18 posted 2008-12-16 09:58 AM


I do agree with your thoughts here.

When I did pray, I would talk to him instead of the formal prayer. Since my dad passed though, I have been spending a lot of time out side the box...and find my thoughts much clearer.

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19 posted 2008-12-16 03:27 PM


Interesting from the original post through each response.  If nothing else, I learn who are and aren't diplomatic.

  Rae

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20 posted 2008-12-16 08:56 PM


Whoso expects a prize for naught
Without it being well besought,
Without a contest or a dare
Without a please, without a prayer,
So let him win the steepest store
Of what dungbeetles like much more.

  

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21 posted 2008-12-16 11:16 PM


Mr Vestibule,

Back in prose mode eh?  I'll address these addtional questions, I'm sure, in Philosophy.  No need for multiple threads really for discussion, when we can consolidate.  

Ess,

don't insult yourself so.  If you think you're being clever, I can only point out that dungbeetles can't.  

Stephen

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22 posted 2008-12-17 08:26 AM


quote:

Whoso expects a prize for naught
Without it being well besought,
Without a contest or a dare
Without a please, without a prayer,
So let him win the steepest store
Of what dungbeetles like much more.



I don’t expect a prize for naught,
Much Lotto ticket I have bought,
And whilst those ping pong balls do bounce,
I pray to gods with every ounce,
Of humble begging that I  own;
To every god I’ve ever known.
I’ve prayed to Allah, Ra and Zeus,
That Hubbard guy, and Dr. Seuss…
I’ve prayed to Jesus, Mary too,
The gods of every ancient Jew,
I’ve prayed in fields while caked in mud,
I prayed so hard I sweated blood
But when those ping pong balls stop bouncing
My Lotto picks, they’re not announcing,
So I’ll keep trying different gods,
‘Till I find one that beats the odds.


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23 posted 2008-12-17 08:28 AM


quote:

Mr Vestibule,



That would be Mr. Vestibular.

Or you can simply call me 'sir' or 'your grace'.

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24 posted 2008-12-17 11:50 AM


lol.

S.


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25 posted 2008-12-17 12:54 PM



There are thousands of reasons to pray,
I thought of three only today:
The first was for money,
The next for a honey
And the last? Well I’d rather not say.



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26 posted 2008-12-17 01:14 PM



It seems you've decided to stay
Oh well, two out of three is ok
Not really that bad
For an atheist lad
Who’d have blown all the cash anyway.


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27 posted 2008-12-17 01:34 PM



Wooest thou brides with wind and air?
Thinkst with thoughts to win the fair?
And matrimony to be made
All for a heap of pray'rs well prayed?
Then shall a maid not be thy meed,
But life without a wife, indeed.
But if thou thinkst Love should smirk
When words are woven well with work,
Timbered with truth, a marriage bless,
Why thinkst a god should look for less?
Who louts with numerated pray'rs
Is like the man that only stares,
And holds a sea in seeing's grip,
But never crosses with a ship.  
On seas' wide back when sailors go
The lodestar helps with leading glow,
But for the man that patters prayrs
And never o'er the ocean dares,
Sits in his house, 'tis no surprise
Little thilk star e'er greets his eyes.
Likewise the gods have op'ner ear
When words with works are knit sincere.



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28 posted 2008-12-17 01:54 PM


quote:

Wooest thou brides with wind and air?


Nope...in fact when I break wind, the bride gets kinda cranky...

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29 posted 2008-12-17 02:08 PM


quote:

It seems you've decided to stay
Oh well, two out of three is ok
Not really that bad
For an atheist lad
Who’d have blown all the cash anyway.


Dear Grinch,

‘Seems’ and ‘stay’ are fuzzy words,
Like random seeds thrown to the birds...
It ‘seemed’ a good idea to pray,
To Zeus for my big Lotto pay…
And while I hope my wife will ‘stay’,
Would you blame her, either way?
I’m not a lad, or atheist,
Such fuzzy labels I resist…
The cash was blown, but not by me…
I gave it to the lottery.

Sincerely,

VB

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30 posted 2008-12-17 02:47 PM


quote:

Wooest thou brides with wind and air?
Thinkst with thoughts to win the fair?
And matrimony to be made
All for a heap of pray'rs well prayed?
Then shall a maid not be thy meed,
But life without a wife, indeed.
But if thou thinkst Love should smirk
When words are woven well with work,
Timbered with truth, a marriage bless,
Why thinkst a god should look for less?
Who louts with numerated pray'rs
Is like the man that only stares,
And holds a sea in seeing's grip,
But never crosses with a ship.  
On seas' wide back when sailors go
The lodestar helps with leading glow,
But for the man that patters prayrs
And never o'er the ocean dares,
Sits in his house, 'tis no surprise
Little thilk star e'er greets his eyes.
Likewise the gods have op'ner ear
When words with works are knit sincere.



Sorry for the earlier flippant comment on the first line...

This is simply outstanding. Shakespeare could do no better, and having read all his sonnets, I know he can do much worse....it's like his ghost is here.

I am truly in awe of this Essorant, and I don't know how long it took you to write it, but it is perhaps the most impressive thing I've read here.
The attention to detail in the metering alone is mind boggling.

Don't mean to blow too much smoke up your kilt...but nice work...it should certainly have it's own thread.

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31 posted 2008-12-17 03:02 PM



There once was a Bard who unable
To figure a fact from a fable
Mistook him for I
Which I cannot deny
Brought cheer to this atheist’s table

I’m godless but prayed for a honey
For cash but I didn’t get money
My third request?
Was a Bard in a vest
Who was tactless, poetic and funny


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32 posted 2008-12-17 03:19 PM


It’s true that this bard is unstable,
An inner ear can quite disable,
Strong steps and clear mind,
And well metered rhyme...
And make me fall under the table!

So again I will offer this truce,
With this sarcastic pawn of the Seuss.
Who tactless and funny,
Can’t get 'im no honey…
But I sure like his rhymes...

..of abuse.

[This message has been edited by Vestibular Bard (12-17-2008 04:42 PM).]

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33 posted 2008-12-17 04:41 PM


I prayed for three clear things and two came true
My honey is my wife - and she’s not you
My other wishes - money
And a poet being funny
I didn’t get the cash I just get you

Abuse?

That’s not the true effect or cause
Offence is not the meter that I chose
I read your rhyme
And took the time
To offer up a poem as applause


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34 posted 2008-12-17 09:20 PM


I prayed that yer lim'rick would meter,
I prayed yer wife would dress you neater,
But now there's no hope,
Go gnaw on your soap…
Until you have verse that is sweeter.

It seems now ‘abuse’ is ‘applause’
An assonant crime that sure was…
Well I read your rhyme,
Twas pearls before swine…
So perhaps the Grinch is Santa Claus?.

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35 posted 2008-12-23 04:50 PM


Well, now, you've seemed to have gotten a greater response to your poem than what any other poem has gotten here in this thread for some time. I'm Jealous (Smiles). Cogratulations!!!!

Good question and a well written poem as well.

Anyway, I especially enjoyed the couple of lines from your poem that read …

quote:
We treat this god, like some poor sod,
Not imbued with omni-sense.



Omni-sense / (Omniscient). Nice play on words. Anyway, I thought.


Good job,

-Bob

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