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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 09-10-2007 07:51 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


The world is like a black void
I want to come out
They say blood is the way
Done in secret should be shouted from the rooftops
My honesty deserves beattings
I'm a beautiful liar of courage
Wrapped tightly in the cone of film

Why can't I break through the driver?
Why can't I have control?
Why am I controled?
Jesus you bled...
Rip me out of this place...
I've been told ressurection comes through pools of pain
Red marking the concrete
Is truly a messy road

and the infernal violence all around
Tearing and shredding
That black spirit holds my mouth shut
Free reign of domination
It takes blood to be free
Dear Jesus, please make me bleed
So I can be free

I am Happy me...

© Copyright 2007 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 09-13-2007 12:46 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Craig,

You are a super poet who uses at times very graphic and very deep deep emotion to express yourself and to me this poem was really that kind of a poem in that it was sort of like watching the movie "The Passion of the Christ" in that, like the movie, it was a Beautiful Beautiful illustration of Godís Sacrifice and of Godís Love but, frankly, I could only watch the movie once because it was soooooo emotional and soooooo graphic. Anyway, this was a Great poem that did remind me of a couple of very worth while things: First, without the shedding of blood there is no forgiveness of sin and, second, that I should be very very thankful for The Blood that Christ shed for me. Amen.

Smiles. Your poem reminded me a bit of one of my own early poems that I posted here in Spiritual. I hope you enjoy it.

http://piptalk.com/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=25&topic=002076

Again, God bless you, my friend, and thank you for sharing.

-Bob
pyre
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2 posted 02-21-2010 10:16 PM       View Profile for pyre   Email pyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pyre

thank you.  it has been a while since I've writtne anything, but it was nice to see your thoughts on my poem.

thanks again.

-pyre
pyre
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3 posted 02-21-2010 10:21 PM       View Profile for pyre   Email pyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pyre

thank you
pyre
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