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BobbyBoy Junior Member
since 2007-08-22
Posts 21West Yorkshire |
Some Some days are better than others Others sometimes not what they seem Every night, true sight vanishes from my reach Some People settle their differences Others seem more content to settle a score Nightmares in a world of opportunity Isn’t that what nightmares are for? Some seek power and glory Others seek money and fame Every fabric of society deals with pain its own way Everybody seeks their solace In many forms or more Dreams distil the nightmares Preventing the fabric of thought Someday people will be more equal than others Others will pillar and scorn Opinion will resemble an arrow of pain Isn’t that what language is for? Some seek Love and Justice Others seek good health and each other Every fabric of society is laid atop of another Most bodies are content being nobodies Nightmares remind them we are weak The very fabric of being is accepting our limits of seeing Some days are better than others ‘Others’ are sometimes not what they seem Every night I feel that true sight vanishes from my reach Some seek God and faith Others seek Queen and Country Some say a tidal wave in China can affect my every feeling Every fabric of society deals with pain Isn’t that what language is for? Preventing the fabric of thought Every fabric of society is laid entwined with another The very fabric of being is accepting our limits of seeing Some say a butterfly flapping its wings can affect my every feeling Some say… all deal with pain its own way Some say it’s down to our dealings Isn’t it down to our feelings? Some say a tidal wave in China can affect my every feeling |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Nightmares remind them we are weak" lot of great lines and one great theme...the line I quote left me a little unsettled.  because it's true. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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BobbyBoy Junior Member
since 2007-08-22
Posts 21West Yorkshire |
Thanks Susan, it's my first time on a poetry forum, I have lots of work, so appreciate any feedback whether positive or negative and glad you enjoyed the piece!!! Thanks for your time |
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