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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 08-14-2007 04:26 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


Newness of life
Seeing the petals
Of a past not long ago

In razor sharp blood clarity
Separate happieness and comfort
And gave them to Jesus
Along with a note of ponderances

Take death,
And give it away
Use my hands and shove
The dirty clouds out
Of my eyes
I want to see you
I want to escape me
I want to be free

I'm going to find
The way into the
'O' of my God
And my answers
And find
My freedom

This coin has 2 sides
Mocking the filthy
The pyramid points up
The funnel points down
And the lion disposes of
The unrepentant

Happy me...

© Copyright 2007 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 08-16-2007 04:20 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Proverbs 3:13

"Happy is the person who finds wisdom and gains understanding."

Craig,

The above scripture was written by King Solomon who had far more wisdom than Iíll ever hope to have so I'll just quote him here.  Smiles.

Anyway, in my opinion and by how Iíve interpreted your poem (youíre going to find the way into the 'O' of your God) youíve begun a Wonderful Wonderful journey to re-define some vital terms (including happiness and comfort) in your life by ďdisposingĒ of the primarily visual and materialistic definitions that most of us humans have of terms and then, perhaps, replacing these terms (growing new petals so to speak) with terms that are representative of a much more Beautiful Beautiful Light.

God bless you, my friend, thank you for sharing, and, let me say it again, itís GREAT to have you posting here.

-Bob
green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 08-24-2007 07:56 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanks Bob.  I wish I could understand Jesus...  I can't possibly though.  He's bizarre to me, and still God.

God bless,
in Christ,
-GIS

Happy me...

pyre
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thank you
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