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getscript
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since 2007-08-06
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0 posted 2007-08-06 07:41 PM



i wonce lost
and did not regain
the truth i held
and held in vain
for i was wrong
to trust in people
who tell of mind
but know not of soal
by Daniel Meadowcroft

made in 1 minute

enjoy

© Copyright 2007 getscript - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-08-06 10:39 PM


wow Welcome to Passions. great first 1 minute post the flow was good, if you can do this in one minute i'm going to be amazed at what you do in 2
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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2 posted 2007-08-07 12:34 PM



W e l c o m e ! ! !



getscript,

I really enjoyed your quick and kind of like post-it type poetry (simple and direct from the heart (by-passing all the poetic structure and mental junk) impressions or impulses jotted quickly down on a memo pad or post-it sticker, envelope, napkin, whatever, whatever). Hey, and, Wow, you even rhymed. That's Amazing!!!

Great job, God bless, and, again, Welcome!!!

-Bob



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