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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2007-08-03 09:53 AM


Lonely Stray

A lonely cat has found his way
To hopeful sanctuary
In untidiness of my back yard;
Midst weed and vine and berry.

He know I am the source of food.
He watches from afar
As I fill a dish in my greenhouse
And leave the door ajar.

I worry that his food's untouched
For more than just a day.
I wonder if he's come to harm
Or merely strayed away.

But then I see, he's come again
And licked the platter clean.
Without a single word of thanks,
He slips away unseen.

He reminds me of myself when I
Take favors from my Lord,
Then thoughtlessly go on my way
Without a thankful word.

Dear Lord, forgive me for the way
I have neglected to
Remember that my blessings
And my joys have come from you.

Joyce 8/03/07

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jody5
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1 posted 2007-08-03 07:44 PM


Joyce I loved the corrolaton from Cat to the Lord.  It is a special poem especially for people who have Cats.We have 2 of them and they are so fun.  God bless you anything that reminds us to pray is in fact a gift from God!  Amen

Hugs Kimberly


Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2007-08-04 11:47 AM




Joyce,

Your poem is a Wonderful poem that I thought read like a very Wise parable. There definitely is a lesson to be learned from reading it. I never thought that I could relate my life to that of a stray cat, but, yes, I certainly can because I too have many many times taken the tremendous blessings and the incredible provisions of our Lord for granted.

God bless you and thank you for sharing this Wonderful poem and lesson with us.

-Bob

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2007-08-05 02:04 AM


Thank you Kimberly and Bob, for your nice words.  Joyce
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