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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
Posts 54
TENN

0 posted 2007-08-01 01:30 AM


For the longest I can remember
Ive been missing something
and didnt know quite where to look.
Always just maundered and felt
a little lost only to realize later
that it was something God took.
Not to get me mad or hurt me
in anyway. But to have for me someone,
who later, would complete me in every way.

so please, after you breathe life into me,
make me from nothing, and take my rib,
make my best friend, my true love
in your eyes and let her live.

After all she'll complete me knowing
only that she was made from me, made for me,
and made to love me as much as she can.
She's my other half. the stars in
my night sky. what makes my stomach
catch butterflies and sets them free with one
touch of her hand.
So when she grabs my hand, and pulls
me close, we'll fill a void between us
that would feel unreal to most.

Because from the moment we meet
we'll never really be apart due to
the fact that we're connected as one.
Intertwined like vines starting at
the heart, going head to toe,
anywhere our blood runs.
I can't wait til He says "Let there
be light in his life."
and shows me the one, my better half,
my wife.

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2007-08-03 02:31 PM


Jamison,

This was a very special poem and I really never thought of it quite like you explained it before, but, truly, how very special it is that God has taken the rib of every man and created for him his most perfect Companion and I don't know why exactly, but your poem has me singing "You Are the Sunshine of My Life" by Stevie Wonder. It must be something about my wife (better half) being the light of my life.

Anyway, enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing it with us and God bless.

-Bob

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