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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2007-07-30 01:41 PM




Krysti, I hope you don’t mind but I left out one of the forms of “have” from your first line challenge and, though I made the slight change, I do hope that you along with whoever else reads it will enjoy the poem. -Bob


My Soul Regret

What I wish I'd done
Does not compare
To what You’ve done for me
You sacrificed Your Only Son
So no regrets should be
But, still, I have this one, Dear Lord
This one I can’t keep hid
This one that’s yet my soul regret
Though, sorry, Lord, forbid
But, shucks, I wish I’d known you
Way before I did.

God bless,
Lighthouse Bob


Next challenge: "If the world should crumble and fall" ...




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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-30 02:44 PM


Oh Bob, you've done it again. Made the world brighter by your use of words. I do not mind at all, the change made the poem fit.
Krysti.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

sandgrain
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2 posted 2007-07-30 08:13 PM


A regret so many of us can identify with, to have known Him sooner!  I surely enjoyed it.

    Rae

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