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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
Posts 69


0 posted 2007-06-08 04:12 AM



such time
such mind
there will be a time
when we knew
such grind
such mine
there was a time when we grew
such time
this mind

textures and lampshades
such time

there was a time when we knew
such grime

so quick that they knew
no time

oh time
whoa time
such time

J.L. Koehler

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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2007-06-08 01:13 PM




carolinabeen,

W E L C O M E


You've managed to present a really nice poem with a really fun play on words... you know what is said about time passing quickly when you're having fun.

Anyway, thanks for stopping by and I hope that you'll return to share more of your poetry with us in the future.

God bless,

-Bob


carolinabeen
Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69

2 posted 2007-06-08 04:01 PM


I thank you for the welcome. If only I had sense enough, faced it all. This to me is a bridge, I see so many lonely words waiting to be shared. I cannot stress even myself enough to share, care, and now I see. Thank you PIP, even if they don't know I swear it every day.

Peace, Love, Happiness
        NOW
      Forever
Altogether Always

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