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Marie777
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0 posted 2007-02-14 12:05 PM


Yesteryears Tears

“Would you like to come with me
We’ll be a couple now,
Here’s my hand, do walk with me
Would you please allow?”

So many years have passed us by
My love was put on hold,
My thoughts inactive for so long
Can it again unfold?

Would at the autumn of my life
All past dreams come true,
That you would really take my hand
And start my life a-new?

Could it be true or do I dream on
Of things that are not there,
Or will our end be better still
Then in our times so fair?

Could it began again
Feel as it once had been,
Will it be a campaign
Will we be happy then?

Winter can be a lonely time
When many aren’t the same,
But would you really love me
Or would it end in pain?

If things were right and you were sure
I’d reach my hand to you,
I’d give it then a real chance
To live our life a-new!!

By,

Marie D. Glass
4/26/2005

© Copyright 2007 Marie D. Glass - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-02-14 11:00 AM


Marie~
Very touching is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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sandgrain
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2 posted 2007-02-14 11:06 AM


What a wonderful 'renewing' poem!  The longing, forgiveness, and willingness are wrapped so nicely in your lines.  It's never too late to rekindle love.

   God bless,
     Rae

Marie777
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3 posted 2007-02-14 11:48 AM


Thank you both so much. Yes, this is so true. I'm so glad that you both enjoyed this poem. God bless, marie

Hugs,
Marie

jody5
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4 posted 2007-02-18 02:57 PM


Marie,  This poem reminds me of one I wrote at pip called First Love.  It is never too late to start again.  I am finding your work very enjoyable and pleasant.  Thank you
  
     Hugs Kimberly


Marie777
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5 posted 2007-02-18 04:30 PM


Thank you so much. For that is the only reason I am here. God bless, Marie

Hugs,
Marie

Tom Zart
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6 posted 2007-02-21 03:41 PM


Yes,Yes a wonderful poem of love and passion.
Marie777
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7 posted 2007-02-21 04:04 PM


Thank you Tom for your kind comments. marie

Hugs,
Marie

tracie66
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8 posted 2007-02-27 04:35 AM


Lovely poem maree, thanks for sharing.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Marie777
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9 posted 2007-02-27 11:12 AM


Thank you Traci for your kind comment. Marie

Hugs,
Marie

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10 posted 2007-02-27 11:15 AM


This trully touched my spirit Marie!
Thanks for sharing,
Stacey

Marie777
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11 posted 2007-02-27 01:55 PM


I'm so glad to hear it. Thank you for your comments my friend. Marie

Hugs,
Marie

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