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Marie777
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0 posted 2007-01-31 01:12 AM


She sat there with a flower
Gently in her hair,
She was so tall to me
So splendid and so fair.

Then one day I noticed
As she was walking by,
No longer was she taller
I too was reaching high.

One day as she slipped the bread
In past the oven door,
That gray was showing timely
Pure brown it was no more.

Jack Benny of years ago
Stopped counting at thirty-nine,
But she choose to stop right there
And instead go back in time.

A time when ears could hear
And voice was sweet and mild,
A time when she saw beauty
The time I was a child.

Someday mother I will see you
When Jesus comes once more,
You'll be splendid tall and fair
As we walk past heaven's door.

She sat there with a flower
Gently in her hair,
She'd been so tall to me
So splendid and so fair.

by,
Marie D. Glass

Author's Comments:
"How we wait Lord for the day we can see our loved ones whole again."


© Copyright 2007 Marie D. Glass - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2007-01-31 03:55 PM


You've written a very sentimental and well written poem. I understand that we will (we will) have Glorified bodies when we reach Heaven, but it seems to me (because of what you've written here) that when you meet your Mother once again up there and if you see her just as you've remembered...

...all would still be just fine.

God bless,
-Bob

Marie777
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2 posted 2007-01-31 04:12 PM


I will indeed be very glad to see her on that day when Jesus returns to take us home. We will have glorified bodies, but the Bible says we will know one another. So that is what I am going by. God bless, Marie
Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2007-02-01 01:42 AM


Big Smiles. What I was trying to say, I guess in a round about way, was that, from what you have written about your Mother, she certainly appeared to live a very good life and that she left a very good impression with you and I believe that this is very very commendable.

God bless,
-Bob

Marie777
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4 posted 2007-02-01 03:23 AM


Ah! Well, I wish I could say that was true. My mother is tall and she is 87 now. She has some mental problems and always has. But when I wrote the poem I think that I was dreaming of a mother that would be so nice to have, and one that I will have in heaven. Healed, beautiful in the Lord and with a gentle flower in her hair.

I also have a daughter I take care of that is Mentally ill. How I pray for the Lord to come so all the pain and suffering will be over. For that day I do go on, for we are promised a wonderful tomorrow and we are here for only a little while. Marie

Hugs,
Marie

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5 posted 2007-02-01 08:05 AM


Marie~
Your love and faith show so brightly in your pennings~

Blessings be to you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2007-02-01 01:05 PM


Your poem brings so much more meaning to me now that you've expounded here and I do love your impression of your Mother as seen in Heaven...

...splendid tall and fair...with a flower gently in her hair...

Beautiful!

-Bob

Marie777
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7 posted 2007-02-01 06:25 PM


Thank you both so much. Glory be to our Lord Jesus. Marie

Hugs,
Marie

RavenSmith
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8 posted 2007-03-02 06:42 PM


I really liked this poem. Just the vision of all you were saying. It is strange to see our loved ones growing older and we no longer children. Roles switching, flooded with memories. Its definitely one of those, wow time goes by but I remember you baking bread.  I like the sensory I had when reading this one. Thank you!

~Best Regards,Raven Smith

Marie777
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9 posted 2007-03-02 06:57 PM


Thank you!... for your kind remarks. I'm glad that it was a good experience for you to read it. Marie

Hugs,
Marie

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