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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
Posts 52
california

0 posted 2007-01-31 12:47 PM



we we're not here when the hands of time were wound
we will not be there when the final bell sounds
but inbetween now and then
we have a life to defend
one moment in time
one chance to live out our rhym
so be joyful and run free
be all the everything you can possible be
what fills life eternity
will so turn to a vegue memory
but remember this one this as you live your life
when the final bell sounds
are you going to heaven or heading stright to hell


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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2007-01-31 12:31 PM


I liked how you brought to light how very fragile life is and how very dependent we are upon a Savior.

-Bob

Marie777
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since 2007-01-30
Posts 93
MI.
2 posted 2007-01-31 01:01 PM


I enjoyed your poetry. A real Biblical study of what hell is, is a real blessing to all mankind. Worth the study for sure. God bless, Marie

Hugs,
Marie

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