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The Comforter
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The Comforter |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
Deeply I’m thinking I’m trying, I’m unsure what I’m really doing Vague impressions are haunting me of a half-remembered thought It tugs at the core of my being, rises the tears that threaten to fall The cold shutters over my arms and entwines it’s self into my heart My hand is raised to my ashen cheek- gone icy as my heart trembles The room turns black and white like an old reeling silent movie A soundless deafening scream gathers in the back of my chilled throat All thoughts are gone, actions, primitive and ancient, take over the scene My shoulders tighten, my back straitens, and my stance is readied for flight I feel nothing- all at once color is back in the vision of my wildly blinking eyes But there is still the wickedest of feelings in my heart, one I never placed there It’s called FEAR, something I fear it’s self after being inflicted with it I realize I’m still the littlest of children, caught in something I can’t comprehend The tears spill over, crowding my vision with watery shapes of time and space My heart breaks and I die a little more knowing I can’t do anything for myself And a kind hand lifts my chin- the being that the hand belongs to voices kindness I realize for an astonishing moment I’m not alone, never was, and never will be There’s a man clad in red and white, and he looks down from above watching me And I know I can live through this earthly hell with his help from on high A Man from on high reached my soul and filled it with blessings and hope that will last forever "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it everyday." Noelle - age 7 [This message has been edited by whitelielovely (01-15-2007 08:07 AM).] |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
How about 'Melting Fears' or 'The Comforter' or something of that nature for a title? I enjoyed this admission of fear followed by the knowledge of Christ bringing comfort. Rae |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
thanks Rae, i'm Whittney, i never do come up with great titles. your idea was most helpful "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sandgrain I loved the title you helped her with, as this read just like a comforter. Lovely work showing the absolute truth that in time of crisis you must hand it over, and he will be there. Blessings to you. |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
Mysteria you are very wise. I respect you for that. Whit "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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