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Musicmaker1969
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0 posted 2006-11-26 05:34 PM



Holy Bible, Word of God
Instruction book for life
Answers every question
A companion book and guide.

Never ending source of truth
Within the pages lie
Giving captives freedom
Where once lost souls may fly.

Poetry and wisdom
And songs of passion’s love
Laws and the Commandments
A Father God above.

Gospels tell the story
Of Jesus Christ now King
Apostles, Acts, the Prophets
Depict Good News to sing.

And soon a time is coming
When Jesus we will see
The book of Revelation
Warns all those who read.

From Genesis’ beginning
To Revelation’s end
God’s Word is written in a book
Love letters to His friends.

Jesus is my Rock, music is my sanity.
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheri1969@gmail.com

© Copyright 2006 Sheri Liegh Adams - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
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Posts 1958

1 posted 2006-11-27 06:17 PM


A good poem about the versitility of the Bible.  However, I do think that the wording could have been made a bit less muddled by the attempt at conforming to a meter here.  Who says meter is the be all, end all in poetry?

Any idiot can see that the result is true.
-- argumentum ad idiotum
Me!

papaskins
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since 2006-11-15
Posts 21

2 posted 2006-11-29 09:59 AM


nice...
lil' Angel
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3 posted 2006-12-01 01:14 AM


Awesome
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