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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 11-15-2006 10:47 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for hunnie_girl

he showed me love
hunnie

alone in the dark, i couldn't see,
and then he spread his light on me,
it was then i knew he was there all along,
holding me up until i became strong,

i was struggling hard with life,
trying hard to end this strife,
it got so i always thought this would be the end,
i lived now i think it was a godsend,

i never thought for one second he was always there,
showering me with love and with care,
telling people from my church i needed their love,
and i was given the hope sent from above,

between the depression and hate,
i just figured it was too late,
but he proved i was wrong and i could live on,
i saw him smile when i went back to church, his eyes they shone,

i thought my life was done,
but he showed me now, it has only begun.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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1 posted 11-16-2006 11:55 PM       View Profile for Sarka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sarka

This was a very inspirational poem.  Full of hope of what is yet to come.  Thank you for sharing.  My favorite part:

alone in the dark, i couldn't see,
and then he spread his light on me,
it was then i knew he was there all along,
holding me up until i became strong,

~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~

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2 posted 11-21-2006 03:18 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

A beautiful testimony from the heart, hunnie.  Life is so very complicated, lonely, worthless and depressing without our Lord and Savior, isn't it?

Thank you for sharing your deepest feelings and God's awesomeness with us.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving,

   Rae
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3 posted 11-22-2006 12:06 PM       View Profile for Pressie   Email Pressie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pressie

"i never thought for one second he was always there,
showering me with love and with care,"

Ah...yes, those "footprints in the sand."

hunnie, Thank you for sharing such a heart felt poem with us!

Omnia vincit amor

TP

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4 posted 11-23-2006 01:36 AM       View Profile for Tom Zart   Email Tom Zart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom Zart

Good poem of love and faith keep up the good work.
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5 posted 11-23-2006 10:58 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

thank you all for your replies. yes, without him i don't know where i would be right now. i'm just thankful he was there when i needed him the most.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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Amazing poem, your very talented.

-Becca
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