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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-11-15 10:47 PM


he showed me love
hunnie

alone in the dark, i couldn't see,
and then he spread his light on me,
it was then i knew he was there all along,
holding me up until i became strong,

i was struggling hard with life,
trying hard to end this strife,
it got so i always thought this would be the end,
i lived now i think it was a godsend,

i never thought for one second he was always there,
showering me with love and with care,
telling people from my church i needed their love,
and i was given the hope sent from above,

between the depression and hate,
i just figured it was too late,
but he proved i was wrong and i could live on,
i saw him smile when i went back to church, his eyes they shone,

i thought my life was done,
but he showed me now, it has only begun.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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Sarka
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1 posted 2006-11-16 11:55 PM


This was a very inspirational poem.  Full of hope of what is yet to come.  Thank you for sharing.  My favorite part:

alone in the dark, i couldn't see,
and then he spread his light on me,
it was then i knew he was there all along,
holding me up until i became strong,

~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~

sandgrain
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2 posted 2006-11-21 03:18 PM


A beautiful testimony from the heart, hunnie.  Life is so very complicated, lonely, worthless and depressing without our Lord and Savior, isn't it?

Thank you for sharing your deepest feelings and God's awesomeness with us.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving,

   Rae

Pressie
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3 posted 2006-11-22 12:06 PM


"i never thought for one second he was always there,
showering me with love and with care,"

Ah...yes, those "footprints in the sand."

hunnie, Thank you for sharing such a heart felt poem with us!

Omnia vincit amor

TP

Tom Zart
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4 posted 2006-11-23 01:36 AM


Good poem of love and faith keep up the good work.
hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2006-11-23 10:58 PM


thank you all for your replies. yes, without him i don't know where i would be right now. i'm just thankful he was there when i needed him the most.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

!becky1990!
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6 posted 2009-09-17 07:52 PM


Amazing poem, your very talented.

-Becca

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