navwin » Main Forums » Spiritual Journeys #2 » . . . Uncompromising
Spiritual Journeys #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic . . . Uncompromising Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-10-30 10:41 AM



uncompromising
living by God’s commandments
devoted duty
~*~
possess faith in God
sweet tranquility in life
righteousness achieved

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-10-30 01:18 PM


Both of these are beautiful 'loper.
Well done!

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-10-30 03:59 PM


Nancy ~
Nice to see you here
Thanx!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2006-11-03 05:03 PM


There is joy in life

when we look at other people

and recognize God

Beautiful, dear Bob!
Love,
Margherita

Musicmaker1969
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada
4 posted 2006-11-26 05:22 PM


This was very short but straight to the point which we do not often see in poetry.

I loved this part the best:

"uncompromising
living by God’s commandments"

That is basically what Christian living is all about.  Well done.

Musicmaker1969

Jesus is my Rock, music is my sanity.
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheri1969@gmail.com

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Main Forums » Spiritual Journeys #2 » . . . Uncompromising

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary