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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
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0 posted 2006-09-03 03:34 AM



you start out like a rain drop pure and clean untainted by everything of this world. you drop to this earth and hit the ground and become some what dirty but as you hit the ground you drop into other rain drops lives and some fall into yours now with  all these drops you become a small puddle some of the drops will evaporate and some will never fade away as more drops fall your puddle moves around and gathers other puddles and is making you and the other rain drops into a small pond continusly growing and growing moving around falling into other lives you grow strong by the rain drops and groups of rain drops you let into your puddle will you become a mighty ocean with huge waves that help other bodies of water become one or will you let your puddle be tainter by the corupt things of this world and evaporate into thin air not really making any kind of impact on this world. this huge ocean was created by one ths only one who can keep it going GOD created each and every one of us for a reason he choese which rain drops fall into your life and which you fall into what kind of rain drop will you be will you bet your rain fdrop make a huge impact on this wold or will you just fade away



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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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1 posted 2006-09-03 06:39 PM


Interesting analagy, but everything run together in all caps made it difficult to read.

   Rae

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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2 posted 2006-11-14 08:59 PM


man this was really good. This poem gave me alot to think about, Cuz GOD is the one the one that put curtain people into our lives. And I guess i just have to except the person that He gave me to watch over. Thanks for making me realize this. I appreciate your writing. I hope to see more from you in the future, Thanks for sharing this with us.  
secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
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3 posted 2006-11-18 02:36 PM


Hey,
This was really good. God always drops people into my life. And I don't fight with HIM. HE knows that I can handle that person. So I have to say you did a AWESOME
job on this and hope to see more from you later, tahnks for sharing with us.  

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