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jenny
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since 2006-03-30
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0 posted 2006-08-22 06:25 PM



hi there ihave had the saddest honour of breaking up with the man i love of eight years.

This poem is called Hush my heart.

Hush my heart it beats to a different pace.

I feel like ihave been in a race.

Whats the matter with me.

Why couldn't I see that you were about to set me free.

Hush let there be peace i just want this pain to cease.

I believed we had a chance.

Then you took someone else to dance.

Iwatched as you walked out that door.

My life was changed forever more.

Hush don't let my tears fall to the ground.

As silence is an eerie sound.

I see you walk away.

What price will i have to pay.

There is not much more that i can say.

Except to accept what has happened on this day.

Hush don't cry.

I hear a slight breeze it is like a sigh.

For me it is time to say that iwant to give life a try.

You don't love me anymore.

I guess someone has to close that door

© Copyright 2006 jenny - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2006-08-22 09:41 PM


It's sad but in the long run, you'll no doubt find it was a blessing in disguise.  I like your poem, even though it's sad, I can detect an attitude that says life will go on toward better days.

God bless you,

   Rae

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-08-23 08:28 AM


Jenny~
You WILL go on ... to a newer and better love that ia worthy of you~
Never, ever settle for less than the total of what makes you happy~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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