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jenny
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since 2006-03-30
Posts 45


0 posted 2006-08-15 11:32 PM



This poem is called ISN'T IT FUNNY.

Isn't it funny that when i feel low that is when my poetry starts to grow.

I just want you to know how much I need you so.

You are important part of me .

Your everything I want people to see.

Your my poetry and in you I care.

Without you I don't know where I would be.

In a boat well and truly out to sea.

When Iget this feeling of being in a storm and when it gets really rough.

Sometimes I wonder am Itough enough.

Then I see you standing there and I know I can get through there.

You give the courage to take that leap into the unknown.

I see the power that I have been shown.

My poetry has made me see that Ican be free.

Isn't it funny the way that I think, I can see myself steeping back from the brink.

My poetry is my missing link.

It has giving me the power to write down all that is side.

I now have nothing to hide.

except to show a heart full of pride.

You see I know your by my side.

Isn't it funny how you are giving me this choice.

I now know that I do have a voice.

Something I never had before.

But this is something Iwill carrywith me forever more.

You have let me see what I can do when Iopen that door.

I will have the pleasure to soar.

© Copyright 2006 jenny - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2006-08-17 01:38 PM


I really enjoyed how you personified your muse here in your poem and I do agree with you that she is very very special indeed.

Again, thank you for sharing and God bless.

-Bob

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