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The Final battle
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The Final battle |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
by Courtney Doors opening slowly, a full moon. Please, please don't come this soon. I didn't ask for this. I see the glowing of his eyes, please please don't make me cry. Take the drip and do a flip, because that's all your gonna get. I've turned away once from the Man up above, The one that sent down a beautiful white dove. Now I won't turn away again. 'Cause I asked for a whole new life. I guess it already begone. Wait a minute let me close my eyes and say a couple words... This new life will never be gone! But sorry anti-God, but He just won!!!! I hope you guys like this one. It's my first poem I wrote about God and the Devil. I'm usually on the teen poems, but I finally saw this one. I'm grateful that we have a site that we can let have everybody see your poems that you wrote about God orwhat ever. But I hope to write more about my religion really soon. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Good job. Welcome to this site. Love, Joyce |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Ah, eternal life never having to battle temptations again! However, these battles do teach us a lot. Life is precious. Welcome to this spiritual corner. Rae |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
thamks you guys. I love to share the poems I write to you guys. I loved your comments as well. |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
Dear Courtney, I like writing about Lucifer and God. There battle in heaven was the greatest battle ever and it still continues. Now that does not mean I'm a devil worshiper. lol I just like the topic and I love reading the last chapter ( Revelations ) in the KJV Bible. You did good keep working on it. Dave |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Oh thank you very much=! I actually like this one that I wrote. But I want to write lots more on this kind of thing... the whole God and the D-E-V-I-L DUH DUH DUH! LOL. But I appreciate your comment... and I hope you don't worship the devil =) cuz we need more fighters for the Man above to stand his ground. |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
I thought you did a great job on this. and Happy New year. |
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