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Stardust198021225
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since 2006-07-16
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0 posted 2006-07-16 05:10 AM




Looking out the window looking at the world
Stangely scared to realize I'm still a little girl.For many tears I have sat here and cryed wondering why he had to die.I ask myself what do I do now ,daddy I have to make in this big world somehow.A little scared to spread my wings afraid of what this life might bring.I spent my life in your arms with daddy their was never any harm.And now I am all alone in this world without you daddy I am a scared little girl.I sit at this window and watch the sun rise with painted saddows of prelit skies.I ask myself where I stand ,and realize I'll be alright because even though he's in heaven I still hold daddys hand.

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Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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1 posted 2006-07-23 05:35 PM


Wonderful poem of love.
the quell
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since 2006-07-19
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2 posted 2006-07-23 06:02 PM


Absolutely beautiful. Heartbreaking to read, and to identify with. You managed to convey such desperation and loneliness. Lovely work.

Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen,
I see not the stars, but the darkness between

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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3 posted 2006-07-23 06:15 PM


All departed Daddys should be mourned like this.  Love, Joyce
Venus1974
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since 2006-07-15
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Tennessee, USA
4 posted 2006-07-29 12:34 PM


sweet and loving

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-09-18 01:53 PM


So very touching and beautiful.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA
6 posted 2006-09-18 08:05 PM


A lump in my throat but a smile on my face because you've turned the sadness into a warm acceptance.  Thanks for sharing this.

   Rae

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